What do you think of these lyrics?

ok, but shades of grey is a bit overused in lyrics in general, the monkees, eagle eye cherry, billy joel are just some examples. also, i know emo is big at the moment but it'll p. perhaps if you had a bit more to the story, such as colours fading to shades of grey, then something happening to bring the colours back, i know its pretty obvious but i'll let you fill in the gaps haha. anyway, keep it up, music is what makes this world go round and keeps us just a little more sane