A little poem. Check it =]?

WOW! that is sick kid. I absolutely love it, one of the best poems I have read among all the crap that floods this site. It offers great pion and emotion and is so completely and utterly true. It is indeed a cliched topic but you did well with it, offered a new spin to an old topic. Overall I love it, I love it, I love it, It is so good. In the future stronger language could improve your writings but keep the flow going like you did in this one (many people struggle with this aspect of poetry.) Very Very Good indeed.